A ten-year-old Australian girl, Rachael Shardlow, survived after being stung by the most deadly jellyfish on earth – the Box Jellyfish. Rachael’s 13-year-old brother pulled her out of One of the reasons I do not go to the beach often, is jellyfish. They are scary and often everywhere. And sometimes lethal. It depends on where you are of course, Dutch jellyfish will not kill you, but do give you a nasty sting. It truly is a miracle this young girl survived, especially since it is the most deadly jellyfish on the planet! I think it is a pity that I keep away from the beach because of such small animals that are not aware of the impact they have on me – or other humans for that matter. Do you like the beach and/or keep away if there are jellyfish? Are you someone who pokes them with sticks when they drift ashore (guilty!) or throw sand over them so people will not step on them? Or are you a jellyfish-loving-person?

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